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Post by cvgirls on Jun 26, 2012 22:08:38 GMT -5
Name: Sandfur
Gender: Female
Age: 30 moons
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Leader
Basic Appearance: Tan tortoiseshell with green eyes.
Appearance:
Personality: Calm and quiet when she is alone. When she is with the others clan's she is arrogant and quick thinking but she loves her clan to the fullest extent.
History: sandfur was originally an alley cat until she found herself wandering through the forest. she was taken being as she was only 7 moons they took her in and made her into an apprentice.then trained her into a good warrior. she eventually became a deputy after teaching her apprentices her ways. eventually her leader fell into the gorge and died as his last life was taken she knew it was her time to become leader. then she took on the role happily leading her clan to her best ability.
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Post by sundirra on Jun 26, 2012 22:20:14 GMT -5
PENDING Can you fix Sandstar's personality a bit? Maybe make some actual sentences? Lol. Her personality is just one long run-on sentence.
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Post by cvgirls on Jun 26, 2012 22:26:57 GMT -5
okay thanks for the advise
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Post by sundirra on Jun 26, 2012 22:32:08 GMT -5
I think we should keep her as a regular warrior, I'll pm you and explain. <3
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